I think that the words and
phrases the really bring out my voice as a writer are all the words I use to
describe what I am talking about, (introvert, puzzle, strives, etc.). Words
like these really show how I feel about the book and what my opinions are. The
symbols that I thought of didn’t come from the book; they came from me and my
own voice. If I had just simply stated the traits of the characters of my book
then the reader would be easily bored. I feel like as a write you must use
things that people are able to connect to and different things that makes the
reader understand more about what he is reading.
I
used a good amount of concrete and abstract diction in my post. This is evident
when I say things like “He goes where the wind blows him…” or “ Ira very well
is the ‘Do not Disturb’ sign you hang on your door at a hotel.” These different
sentences helped to showcase my point of view and perspective on the characters
that I was writing about, which is the whole point of adding the abstract and
concrete diction. It helps the reader feel like he knows the characters that I
am writing about through my own representation. For syntax I use a mixture of
short and long sentences. I will start off with a short sentence like, “Sophia
reminds me of a puzzle.” And then I go more into depth with longer sentences
after this as you can see when I say “Sophia reminds me of a puzzle. You know the final
picture, but she reveals little bits and pieces about herself that help you to
realize who she is and what she believes in.” The short sentences ties the
reader in and just flat out tells the reader what I think and then the longer
sentences show my explanation for my thinking.